feed back

The feed back that we got form our rough cut was mostly positive. People said that they liked the black and white shots because they showed an edgy side as well as an emptiness when she wakes up in the morning compared to her drunken state the night before.
The footage of the girl in the morning had mixed feed back, some people thought that we should include subtle sounds to add more interest, but the majority of people said that they liked the no sound element because it represented the type of peace and quiet you want when you are hungover, but at the same time the silence could be cut down and diagetic sounds added because otherwise the silence goes on for a long time.
It was clear to everyone that our genre was British social realist, and that our footage related to the genre well. The different use of camera shots was noticed and one of the favourite shots was the bottle shot because it showed more and more bottles appearing as the night progressed.
The contrast of colour footage at the end worked well because it meant that people noticed the title more as there was a change in colour it drew more attention to it.
We got feed back on our sound that we should use more diagetic sounds with our footage and that parts of the clip make it look like a drugs commercial, so for this we decided that we would get rid of the end of the footage, where the character speaks.
We got positive feed back about our over lays of the footage at the beginning where its the stereo clips, people thought this worked effectively and didn't need to be edited.
People thought that for our titles, there were not bold or clear enough, that they got lost behind the footage, so we needed to work on them. Add more, make them a darker colour and make them a bigger font.